以下是根据您的要求将《暮色》、《玫瑰》、《雨后》等冰心诗歌翻译为英文的版本：

At Midnight

The sky turns a deep crimson, and the shadows start to appear. The stars begin to rise, one by one, as if waiting for their turn to burn. "Who are you?" a young boy asks, his voice trembling slightly as he sits in his room. "What are you doing? Why come here?"

There is something so profound about each of these moments—how the stars begin to rise and set, how the shadows appear and disappear, how the light shifts between day and night. It seems like a constant theme that shapes the very essence of existence.

玫瑰

The page turns a deep crimson, the book pages turn a deep crimson as well. The soft scent of rose petals lingers in the air; it's a sweet memory. "A rose," says a young girl standing at the window, her eyes reflecting the soft light of dawn. "What are you doing?" she asks, her voice smooth and steady.

This is a simple love story: a rose that has been waiting for its moment to open—until now, it hasn't. The girl's heart is heavy with the weight of this waiting, yet it knows that one day, the rose will finally bloom. And so, they both move forward into their own lives, knowing that their love will never end.

雨后

The soft rustle of leaves begins to fill the ground, a gentle hum as if we are living in a time when nature has fully rested. The water cascades gently through the streets below, painting the sky in hues of yellow and orange. A young boy steps out into the rain, his face pale but determined. "Who are you?" he asks, his voice filled with fear and hope.

This scene is one of beauty—both natural and human. The rain brings to mind ancient myths about nature and human resilience; it also reminds us of the fragility of all living things. Yet in this moment, though the world seems so still, the boy knows that even in such a still state, there is always change.

成功

The flower begins to bloom, its petals glowing with soft light as if waiting for its moment to bloom. The young girl stands before it, her eyes wide and focused on what lies ahead. "What are you doing?" she asks, her voice filled with worry and determination.

This is a simple truth: every flower is an individual, born from the soil that settles around it. It is also a truth about life itself—every moment, every decision, carries within it the potential for growth and transformation.

黎明

The sky turns a deep crimson once more, and the shadows start to fade away like a fading light. The stars begin to rise again, one by one, as though waiting for their time to burn. "Who are you?" a young boy asks, his voice trembling slightly as he sits in his room.

This is a constant theme of existence—how we emerge from our previous life, and how each new day brings us closer to the future. It's also a theme of growth: even as we age, we always find new ways to expand ourselves and connect with others.

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